Tea and Biscuits
Tea and Biscuits,
What a combination,
It seems to be made in heaven,
Every bite is infinitely better when dipped in tea,
why it so happens is still a mystery,
be it Bourbon, Monaco or the omnipresent Parle G,
its something to dip a biscuit in tea..
Accidents do occur, its heartbreaking to see ur biscuit break in half,
but such is life, and thats why its best to forget about it with a laugh :)
No matter how many u eat, there is always a crave for some more,
and that is precisely what keeps happy the nearby kirane wala store :)
This was the story of Biscuits and Tea,
one that will surely go down in every body's memory..
Every bite is infinitely better when dipped in tea,
why it so happens is still a mystery,
be it Bourbon, Monaco or the omnipresent Parle G,
its something to dip a biscuit in tea..
Accidents do occur, its heartbreaking to see ur biscuit break in half,
but such is life, and thats why its best to forget about it with a laugh :)
No matter how many u eat, there is always a crave for some more,
and that is precisely what keeps happy the nearby kirane wala store :)
This was the story of Biscuits and Tea,
one that will surely go down in every body's memory..
Another approriate heading for this post - Why some poems dont get published!! :D
9 comments:
Lolz I prefer biscuits n coffee always !! but the meanin of the poem doesnt change ...coz its the same essense ;)
cute one :)
hehe..cute poem :D
the conceptuality between the tea n biscuit is really worth appreciating! :)
Hey this one is like.. u knw rite out of schooldays.. the kind we might come across in say nursey... to be able to write in such a manner requires good skill and imagination... darn good effort.. adn well really cute!! :)
cute poem, i like my bourbon buiscuits with milk and horlicks though :-)but...nicely written lines...easy and precise...nice combo!!
P.S: i too hate it when my buiscuit breaks!! it gets all soggy...
den i "grrrrr" like a doggie! :x
lolzz............neat poem prateek....uv heard tht frm me everytym.but i guess the funs in reading tht ryt. :D
lyk mosta the folks i lurved this line:
Accidents do occur, its heartbreaking to see ur biscuit break in half,
lol..pretty descriptive poem u have thr sirji..... :)
cute simple n yet quite appropriate :D
@ Aditya
well i personally am not a big fan of it, but love to see that even Coffee lovers have related to the poem :)
@ Sweet Magpie
:) thanks for the appreciation.
@ Sam
u know i sincerely hope they'd put this in one of those Nursery Rhyme books :D
i dont really know about the skill and imagination, but thanks for finding it cute :)
@ Asreen
u know i have a glass of "Chocolate Horlicks" almost daily, and it just so happens that at times i have it with a Bourbon biscuit :D
well we all hate it when it breaks and gets soggy, but the perfect remedy is to keep a spoon around, atleast saving the drink from getting spoiled!
Am glad u wrote this poem coz hardly anybody writes on simple or mundane things like this.
It was fun reading it. =)
@ Shas - Thanks a lot :) And i am really glad you liked it :)
Heyy everybody, well here's my second shot at poetry! Would appreciate if you could take a look 'Rain' @ http://i-dout.blogspot.com/2009/07/rain.html
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